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Once upon a time the re was a coke man who lived in coke- a -cola Road. Coke- man was a Mean bottle. He woukd always be mean to everyone he saw. One day coke-man caused a fight at school. coke-man goes to mongol school. When he was fighting he knocked someone out of its bottle cap. coke-man realised bullting wasn't a good thing so then coke-man became a hero and didn't stay as a bully. So one day there was some crime and coke-man came along and helped end the fight. So coke-man fighted this sprite guy who was not right. He punched him in the cap and sprite who was not right got knocked over and was puffed he got up, turned upside down and took his cap off and flew away back to his mum crying and he said this: "Mum, why did you call me sprite who is not right." "I want to be called SPrite who is right.
The End...
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